Tuesday, 5 November 2013
Fan Fiction - Princess Pottypant’s Diaper Dimension Universe - Put In Her Place
An enormous story for a single image, but I don't like mixing and matching if they're not from the same set. Recommend opening the image in a new tab, or viewing on DeviantArt which allows larger image sizes than blogger.
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I enjoyed this story, but, ironically, I think it needed to be a little longer. For example, I didn't realize just how old Jasmine was at the time she started having accidents until I reached the final paragraph and it was made clear she was college age at the time and a few other contextual details are missing , though they can be inferred. Still, its not bad or anything, and its nice to see fanfiction for the Princess's great story.
ReplyDeleteOops, she was meant to be in highschool when it started, I guess it seemed like a clear picture in my head which didn't all get communicated into words.
DeleteAnd yeah it was originally planned as one of several longer written fan fictions set in Ms Pants' universe, but once I had an appropriate picture I had to just get it over with, and couldn't find the rest of the set sadly.
This was fun!
ReplyDeleteVery nice! An interesting idea, and nicely done. Good job!
ReplyDeleteIt didn't have as much build up and late story as I would have liked, but it's a story I've been dying to do ever since your chapter about the changing room fiasco, so most of the credit goes to you. Mine wasn't even written very well in retrospect. :P
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