It's quite dark (forced diapering, diaper usage, ageplay spanking, giantess theme, etc), so may not appeal to everybody.
It comes as a PDF (there's no DRM) which allows better reading of the comic (scrolling through pages). You can also just drag the file into Google Chrome to read it there, which works well using the screen-width stretch button. It's hosted on Lulu.com's ebook store, so that you can re-download it once purchased. Lulu is pretty straight forward, it just requires a simple (free) sign up like ebay or amazon. If you have any troubles or questions, let me know.
Naturally I'm somewhat nervous, but hope that people will like it. Keep in mind that it is an amateur comic, so the art is not the best out there. Most of it is flat shaded, but does fortunately get better progressively due to being drawn sequentially. It's somewhat divided into a one-third 'story' segment, and two-thirds 'action' segment.
Synopsis:
World of the Immortals: A Diplomatic Incident
When bored college student Nadia discovers that travel to parallel worlds is possible, she sets off to make a discovery on an alternate planet, expecting to be a famous scientist before the day is out.
What she doesn’t expect is to encounter the immortal giants of the alternate world - a race who consider her nothing more than a baby, not even old enough to be out of diapers, and definitely not too old to be spanked.Will Nadia escape her new Mommy and Daddy? Or will the college girl be trapped in a life of diaper changes and nursery playtimes?
[Purchase Link]
Price: $14.99 USD
Length: 63 pages, Several Hundred Images
I just downloaded it, but all of the text in the word/thought bubbles is blurred to the point of being unreadable. I'm trying it in a different program, but do you know if this is an issue on the upload end?
ReplyDeleteNevermind. Works fine in Adobe Acrobat but not in Preview (the default Apple program) for some reason.
DeleteGlad to hear, that would be have been unfortunate. :/
DeleteI haven't had the chance to read it yet, but I thought I'd point out that you can use the coupon code AUGBOOKS12 to get 20% off until the end of the month.
ReplyDeleteI finally got the chance to read it, and I really enjoyed it. The art wasn't perfect, but I thought it was pretty good - the only big problem area was some of the backgrounds - especially considering how much there was. I was also quite impressed with the length - that let it feel much more like a story, with a nice sense of scale rather than just a scene, which a lot of these diaper comics feel like, since they have so little space to work with. Great job!
DeleteAlso, I hope you don't mind me posting the coupon. I assume that Lulu is like most places where the supplier ultimately still gets paid the same regardless of if the purchaser uses a coupon or not, but I apologize if that isn't the case.
Really glad that you liked it :D. I would have loved to have worked on it even more, but after five months it seemed time to just put it out there, though am really glad that people seem to think that it's still worth the price :D. I doubt that I'll earn back production costs, but am hopefully going to commission OkayOkay to do a different storyline with whatever I do make, and also make shorter ones myself, with better quality art now that I've learned so much (e.g. the background image on the blog is a more recent picture).
DeleteThe coupon's fine, Lulu provides estimated amounts and they all seem to be $12, which is only a few cents less than what they said that my cut would be. It seems that it was entirely Lulu's loss on what would have been their expected cut of the sale (so really, it seems to have just made it more awesome for buyers, which probably has helped me too).
Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the comic, and it was well worth the price. I appreciated the bits of humor throughout and how a lot of it was about humiliation.
ReplyDeleteWhile I'd definitely buy another comic you made/wrote/commissioned, I'm not sure that I'd want to see more of this particular story. (Though you could surprise me, depending on the plot.)
From some of the previews that showed her thought bubbles, I thought she might be in a position where she was unable to speak other than like a baby. I think that could be something interesting to explore in a comic since we have the benefit of reading her thoughts as she reacts to how she's treated.
Just a thought. But again, great comic and thanks for all the work you put into it.
Thank you :D. I had thought that another volume of the story might seem 'more of the same', but I do have plans to make it interesting ;).
DeleteI'm unsure if I'll do any more comics though, since this ended up costing me far more than expected. If I do any more, they will probably have to be shorter cheaper projects, with less risk.
You could still get a lot more sales. I read on the CreationComic blog that it took him almost a month to sell 100.
DeleteMy other suggestion would be that, if you wanted to do more comics with longer stories, you could sell them in multiple parts. I think a lot of people are more likely to pay $5 or so every now and then for 10-15 pages than pay $15 all at once. So you could maybe make more money per page and more overall.
Just suggestions. I'd hate for this to be your only comic because you're one of the few people I've found online who are really good at these kinds of stories.
> You could still get a lot more sales. I read on the CreationComic blog that it took him almost a month to sell 100.
DeleteYeah that's what motivated me to do this. I figured that if people would buy that, which was completely unadvertised, then I had some hope. :P
If I do any more, they'll be much shorter pieces, possibly combined with a text story (I've seen a few Japanese productions like that, a lot of text and a few great drawings).
Now I'm just waiting for CH 11 of shipped away *huffypouts*
ReplyDeleteHeh, I have been working on the next chapter of Shipped Away, it's just that I'm trying to force myself to focus on more productive things for a while before going broke from too much time spent on diaper related activities. :P
DeleteNow that it has been a month how have your sales been? I love all of your work and look forward to more.
DeleteYour friend,
Nick
I've made over a thousand in sales which isn't so bad :), forgetting that it unfortunately cost me several times that to create it. :p
DeleteA fun story! And a nice Doctor Who reference :)
ReplyDeleteSaw your post on newfapchan, but it's easier to comment here. I'd definitely be interested in a new comic from you. I think you could make more money on your investment with shorter stuff because you could charge $1 for every two or three pages. (So $4 or $6 for a 12 page comic.) Personally I'm willing to pay that for a good story with your current artistic talent level. (If your illustrations have improved from this, even better.)
ReplyDeleteAwesome to hear :). I definitely wouldn't be able to do as many pages per dollar as with this one, but the quality would presumably be higher, and the story tighter (I like how OkayOkay can tell an entire series of stories in just one page). It will just depend on time.
DeleteI loved the story Sir Spank Nice Job !!
ReplyDeleteWhat Would love to see more in next issue is:
1.public diaper changes & spanking
2.dirty diapers
3.waddling
4.breastfeeding
5.Some of Nadia friends make an appearance as playmates
6.Nursery school
7.rocking horse punishment in messy diapers
Keep up the good work !!
;)
Haha thanks, and I have many many such plans. ;)
DeleteThere'll probably be no more comics for at least a few more months though, very busy unfortunately.
Ok thats fine
ReplyDeleteI got this a few weeks ago and just wanted to say that this is an absolute masterpiece when it comes to story telling, in regards to ABDL literature, and the art is pretty good too. I know it's been five years, but I truly hope that you are making another comic or maybe even a sequel to this. I was kind of saddened that her little friend did not get adopted too.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
Thank you very much :), it helps to have a great inspiration story to get things moving. There are more comics in the works, none quite as focused and plot driven as this one at the moment, but I think they'll still be fun.
DeleteThere are plans for her friend and several others ;). Technically from Nadia's perspective, by the time they get back, several years might have passed since the comic release, so a delayed sequel might fit quite well...
How long does it take for the comic to sent to me?
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